Fantasy
by: Arl
If I'm only be free.
As free as a pretty bee.
Sure, you can own me.
We stay together can be.
But please, take care of me.
Now that, we're both not free.
No time for loneliness as be.
Ultimately, let's fly as high as tree.
Like the pristine birds that fly candidly.
Like dainty butterfly down the garden blithely.
Only in our dreams, never in reality.
Maybe we can be, I'm afraid completely.
Let's live happily, but not hurt somebody.
Better keep carefully your unclouded love as a great fantasy.
Then I'll keep mine like a pie in the sky.
ARL ^_^
this one is brilliant, especially
ReplyDelete"Now that, we're both not free.
No time for loneliness as be."
cheers
Mr. Nayyar that line in the 2nd stanza...
Delete"Now that, we're both not free.
No time for loneliness as be."
...answered on the 3rd stanza of the poem...
"Only in our dreams, never in reality."
Beyond all...Thank u so much Mr. Nayyar for appreciating that simple and explicit poem i hardly composed ^_^
Keep Safe!!!
Lalim nman, mkhang inspirado k girl. Kaw ha? Thats for who? Gusto k ung "Letter to Destiny". Make 1 more. You have a nice compositions.
ReplyDeleteInspirado lang ba ang pwedeng gumawa ng mga ganyang sulatin? I dont think so:)...I just love writing sometimes.However about "Letter to Destiny", i'll try if i can do write one more about it.Lastly, Thank u so much for liking it! ^_^
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